Week 8 Comments and Feedback


I would rate the quality of the comments and feedback I am receiving from my peers 9 out of 10. There is some very good tips and suggestions that I have found and used in my future posts and revisions. I am finding the comments that follow WWW to be most helpful. I believe I am leaving very good comments for other students because mostly I use the format WWW when leaving comments. As well I do generate ideas when reading other posts, for my upcoming stories or blogs. I do believe there is a small connection between myself and my fellow peers through this blog, and I am happy with my blog and intro, because I believe it paints a good picture of what I am like. To make the feedback assignments more useful I believe I can be a little more in with the WWW feedback.


(I thought this photo was fitting and its true, Source: Cats)

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