Week 13 Story: The Great Race
One brisk December day in the northern providence of British Columbia.
There was set to be a great ski race, between two of the country’s greatest
skiers. Anna was the best skier British Columbia had ever seen, she was younger
and did not have much big race experience. Jennifer was an Olympic gold
medalist for Canada as well had many other medals under her belt. On the line
of the race was acceptance to the following years Canadian Olympic team, as
well the recognition of being the best.
Anna was very nervous, as she knew she was fully possible of
winning but still had small reserves of doubt. She had watched Jennifer her entire
life fly down the mountains, taking medal after medal. Jennifer on the other
hand had confidence through the roof, thinking of this as just another race.
They decided to meet up two days before the race for coffee at the base of the
mountain. As they say at the bottom of the run they conversed about there own
experiences and where they came from to get where they were today. Jennifer was
taken back by the drive the young Anna had, and her look on the idols and
mentors she looked up to such as herself.
The race day was upon the small town in British Columbia and
the base of the slope was packed with a rowdy audience. Some with signs for
Jennifer and some for Anna, the two women looked down upon the crowd and for some
reason this race felt different. Both racers were fond of each other and both
wanted the other to win. Each kept saying I am going to fall and let you win
because you are the best. Finally, after countless threats of forfeiting they
agreed to ski down together hand in hand and cross the finish line together.
(The picture above is of an alpine ski race. Picture Source: Ski Race)
Author’s Notes
The original story I based “The Great Race” over was
Arjuna’s Dilemma.In the story above I told a tale where one would normally
think a race can only end one way. But Anna and Jennifer showed that a race can
end in peace and a tie. In the Indian story a battle is about to take place
between an army commanded by Bheeshma fighting an army protecting Bheema. Arjuna goes out in
between the two armies and looks upon the opposite army. He is taken back and
second guesses his god on why they are fighting. Because the uncles, sons,
grandfathers that are on the other side are giving up their lives and wealth to
Fight. Then the rest of the story he tries to convince the lord Krishna not to
fight, And when it comes time to fight he says it would be better if the sons
of Dhritaraashtra would kill me with their weapons in battle while I am
unarmed, So he goes to the middle of the battle field and sets down his bow and takes a seat in
his chariot over whelmed. What I took from this story was that if violence is
the only route out of a situation, you can still be your own person and choose
peace instead. This can be made into a possible story for later stories in this
class.
I really like your story. You did a fantastic job keeping the theme from the original story relevant in the new story about skiing. Obviously, agreeing to not compete in a ski race is different than laying down your arms in battle, but the message is still there. You are a great writer and good luck with the rest of the semester!
ReplyDeleteHey Drew! This reminds me of the dilemma that occured in the U.S. Final Open 2018 when Serena Williams, the tennis legend, lost to Naomi Osaka, a less experienced tennis player, and her win was contested by spectators. In interviews, Naomi talks about how terrified she was about facing Serena Williams, as she has a reputation for being one of the best tennis players to ever live, and I think it took so much bravery for her and Anna to not less their lack of experience affect their confidence
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story and how you retold it from the original. I thought the message you conveyed was great from the original story on still having a your own say even if violence was the only option. I like the change you made in this story where both Anna and Jennifer decided to finish the race together. Overall, great job on your story and keep up the good work!
Hi Drew, I loved your version of the story! It was so heartwarming that two competitors with different personalities were able to care for one another. I am sure forfeiting would be tough for anyone but this story was so cute. Especially, with them being able to cross the finish line together! I am looking forward to reading some more of your stories.
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